Kia ora today I am going to show you my writting for this I week. I did it on how to care for a dopg and it was really fun. I have a dog at home and his name is Motor he is so cute. It is also the first week back at school from the holidays hope you enjoy
How to care for a dog
Hi I am Olivia and this text is about how you should look after your dog or if you want a dog you
will know how to look after it and know what you need to provide it with the stuff that it will need.
What is your favourite breed of dog? Mine is a golden Retriever
You will need to know to always give your dog food every morning and night.
It is very important. You also need to give your dog water because it needs to stay hydrated
so it is very important. If you don’t give your dog food and water because sometimes it can die.
You also need to keep your dog fit because then it might be lazy and won't run around or play
with you. You need to train your dog properly because it might hurt you or bite you
sometime, maybe even eat your shoes. If you want to dog walks you
Sometimes you need to take your dog out for some fresh air in the car with the window down.
You need to wash your dog because it can get fleas and really smelly.
Do you have a dog?
If you have a dog what breed is it?
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI think your writing is good because it has lots of sentences and it has paragraphs in it. Next time I think that you could do some more sentences and more facts. My favourite dog breed is a bull mastiff, Yes I do have a dog and she is a bull mastiff.
Kiriana