Do you think that schools should ban junk food? Have fun reading bye.
Should schools ban junk food!
Imagine a world not being healthy, the world would be so horrible and boring?
But, I think schools should ban Junk Food. Nobody wants to be made fun of from their food because they don’t eat healthy and don’t exercise. And trust me nobody would want to be made fun of at all.
I think that school should ban junk food because it’s not gonna make us exercise and it’s not gonna make us happy because we won't be feeling very good if we eat too much. If we eat healthy food the world would be so much better and lots of people will exercise. You can still have some junk food but not so much as long as you exercise accordingly.
Please it will be better if we ban junk food.
Written by Olivia Holden. Thank you.
Hi Olivia, I agree with you about banning junk food at school. If we eat too much of it we certainly will become unhealthy, and that affects our learning, behaviour and wanting to exercise.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your opening sentence as it put a picture in my mind and made me think about my own opinion to your statement. Before you publish, just make sure you have edited your work, especially checking for full stops in the right places and that the sentences make sense.
What is your favourite “junk food” when you are allowed it? Mine is potato chips!!
Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteGreat job on introducing your task and explaining what your learning task was.
I like how you have tried to open your persuasive writing with a rhetorical question because this makes me want to keep reading. Perhaps read over it to make sure you are asking a question correctly. I do agree with you, when I eat better, I feel healthier and this make me feel better.
My favourite kind of junk food is pizza and chocolate. What about you?
Hi kirstin and Miss Carney I think you had a great choose on your favourite junk food. Mine is probbly pizza. Thank you for commenting on my blog I hope you are having a safe lockdown.
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