This is my prayer I made it enjoy
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, March 10, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteYour Blog Post this week was awesome. I really liked how in your pray you included your friends , family and pets. It was really good. Maybe next time you could talk a little bit why you made this pray.
Keep up the great work.
Good Job!!
Ari
Kia Ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteThat is such a nice prayer. I really enjoy reading it. Next time you could add a we bit more of a introduction to explain why you made this prayer.
Well Done!!
Zoe
Thanks Ari and zoe you are really kind
ReplyDeleteThanks Ari and zoe next time I will try to add a bit more of a intro but thanks it is realy kind of you guys to comment on my blog
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